Retake: Post Production Feedback

Front cover

positives
The audience felt that my masthead was very creative as I made it stand out with the outer glow. They thought that my masthead was successful at grabbing the reader as they said that was the first thing that they saw when they looked at my front cover. They thought that my slogan was very clever. I also received positive feedback of the colours used they said that they really worked well together and they said that I was very consistent through out the front cover. They said that my masthead was very different and unique. The audience also said that the colours of gold made my front cover look classy.
Weaknesses
Some people thought that one of my coverlines are too big (this weeks tour) and that it overpowered the page and also took a little bit of attention from the main cover line a bout the girl group. They thought that there should have been a white stroke around free poster instead of black to make the words pop out. They also thought that my other coverlines were too small. Some people thought that I needed more coverlines to fill the page. Some people thought that the models in my picture needed to look sexier and show more attitude like other female groups.

Contents page

Positives
The audience thought my content page was well layed out; they also said that they liked the yellow and the grey combination. They also said that they looked that there was a miniature copy of my magazine at the top of my page. They said that the layout looked very professional.
They said that my font is not very consistent, which was a shame because everything else was fine. They also said that I needed more pictures on there as well.

Double page spread

Positives
People said that they loved it that it looks very unique and stylish. Other people said they loved the font used for the quotes. People said that they loved the contrast between black and white, also that names are under each individual. They also said that the layout was wonderful and that they actually see this being in a magazine.

Weaknesses
People said that they could see that the white sheet that I used for the background for one of my images looked crease.